if i look hard enough
do you think it possible
that i might find
my long lost lovin’ mind
lost to the
ravages of your
mysterious kind
if i look deep enoughand deeper still
might i find love
upon the hard flat sill
that borders the lifescape
of your worn weary heart.....
if i climb down and down
into the looking glass now
might i be then a
part of your life
a life so lost in the
echos of time
no longer true
nothing makes sense
just a piece of this
cold hard brass
if i look long enough
if i look deep enough
if i climb down enough
where would i be
neverneverland
and no longer
me
into the looking glass now
might i be then a
part of your life
a life so lost in the
echos of time
no longer true
nothing makes sense
just a piece of this
cold hard brass
if i look long enough
if i look deep enough
if i climb down enough
where would i be
neverneverland
and no longer
me
6 comments:
This is perfectly awesome.
thanks so much trish - it's one i did almost a year ago [01/21/2010 - neat set of numbers on date] over in words unspoken - came across it yesterday totally out of the blue and decided to post it here - actually over there it's title is "the love of alice" - but when i re-read it, that title didn't seem to "fit" any longer so i changed the title to IF - anyway - it's one that i truly relate to in so many ways - so glad you like!
If. Hmmm. So many ifs in life.
such a powerful word for such a small one, isn't IF?
I can relate to this one so much...
Your poetry always resonates with me and i guess with everyone who has been in love, or who has love and lost...
xoxo
oh, thank you so very much, zuzana! it's always so wonderful to hear that my words touch someone else in even a small way - thank you!
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