he wakes in her
the primal beast
upon whose heart
the primal beast
upon whose heart
he must needs feast
he sings to her
in ancient rhyme
his love for her
throughout all time
in ancient rhyme
his love for her
throughout all time
he lives in her
aphrodite’s dream
and when they love
aphrodite’s dream
and when they love
the night bears their scream
he comes to her
in primordial lust
she comes to him
because she must
he wakes
he sings
he lives
her
he
comes
in primordial lust
she comes to him
because she must
he wakes
he sings
he lives
her
he
comes
~
- inspired by nica and ben who live in that place called ESPERANZA by TRISH MACGREGOR -
- a place where hope lives on -
- and love never dies -
~
8 comments:
That fits perfectly for Nica and Ben. I anxiously wait to hear the rest of their story. Very nice poem. I'm kinda hoping they make Esperanza into a movie. I personally think it would go over big time! Keep the hot stuff coming'!!! (smiles)
So sensual. You knock me out.
Pearl
and it fits perfectly for each of us, too, i think, karen - at least for me - that need more than want thing - the craving - and more is never enough - never - still -
oh, pearl! i'm very moved by your comment! thank you -
and karen again, about the hot stuff - girl, this isn't "hot" - it's mild - compared to what i think and feel most of the time! ;) uh, ok ok, ALL of the time! ;)
Nica and Ben love this piece! They say you've captured what they feel perfectly.
Mmmm - think I must read Esperanza!
so happy to hear nica and ben like as they have "mused" several of my pieces which are some of my most favorites - cannot wait to find them in ghost key, trish!
oh, dear, mike! you've not read esperanza? well, stop what you're doing right this moment and grab a copy at amazon, man! you won't be able to put it down, i promise! thanks so much for coming by - hope all is well in your world!
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