out of the burning embers
the mighty phoenix rose
all he’d done no one knows
even he does not remember
he spread his ancient wings
into the crimson sky
away from the streets did he fly
longing to hear the angels sing
dragging behind
all he’d done no one knows
even he does not remember
he spread his ancient wings
into the crimson sky
away from the streets did he fly
longing to hear the angels sing
dragging behind
the shadow of his soul
nothing now his to control
with the smell of burning flesh
his spirit now enmeshed
and from this life
nothing now his to control
with the smell of burning flesh
his spirit now enmeshed
and from this life
he begged to part
to cleanse his anguished heart
of all his sins he did repent
only to find his time was spent
and to raise once more his mighty sword
against the maddening raging horde
of those he once called friend
who now were set to cause his end
it once was his across the land
he had the world at his command
but memories tainted by that crimson time
of life on streets when none was kind
the sound of his tears crash to grey concrete
where black leather wraps his weary feet
tracks gouged in the flesh of his face
like a lonesome railroad criss-crossing the landscape of his life
where might he go for a touch of grace?
a land without knife without sword without strife
and so it was that the bird took flight
choosing no longer to fight the fight
of waging chaos night after night
he flew through the valley of the darkened dead
charging his mighty wings ahead
and changed his ways of war
to those of heaven afar
and from his fall from grace
the phoenix prayed salvation wait
and with this flight of righteousness
the holy gods upon him blessed
giving his spirit its needed rest
no longer on its violent quest
and in his stead
a righteous man a valiant man
before us now proudly stands
who of all sin now has shed
and to us proves each golden day
that love of life is our true stay
the only way
to cleanse his anguished heart
of all his sins he did repent
only to find his time was spent
and to raise once more his mighty sword
against the maddening raging horde
of those he once called friend
who now were set to cause his end
it once was his across the land
he had the world at his command
but memories tainted by that crimson time
of life on streets when none was kind
the sound of his tears crash to grey concrete
where black leather wraps his weary feet
tracks gouged in the flesh of his face
like a lonesome railroad criss-crossing the landscape of his life
where might he go for a touch of grace?
a land without knife without sword without strife
and so it was that the bird took flight
choosing no longer to fight the fight
of waging chaos night after night
he flew through the valley of the darkened dead
charging his mighty wings ahead
and changed his ways of war
to those of heaven afar
and from his fall from grace
the phoenix prayed salvation wait
and with this flight of righteousness
the holy gods upon him blessed
giving his spirit its needed rest
no longer on its violent quest
and in his stead
a righteous man a valiant man
before us now proudly stands
who of all sin now has shed
and to us proves each golden day
that love of life is our true stay
the only way
for this new man
who now before us stands
the valiant phoenixman
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8 comments:
Wow. This is beautiful. I wonder if we all are phoenixes in some ways.
i think perhaps we might be - i like the idea of having been/being a magnificent creature such as the phoenix -
thanks so much for the kind words - i've had these scribbled in my little book of books for some time now and just could never get the finishing touches together - but today was the day - so glad you enjoyed!
Beautiful poem. Sometimes we all need to be reminded that we can rise again. And be beautiful.
Thank you for your very kind comment yesterday.;) I hope your troubles are not too heavy...
I am taking a break from the virtual world myself, thus I hope you will enjoy what is left of the summer in your part of the world.,))
xoxo
As Zuzana mentioned, we need to be reminded about rising over and over. I enjoyed reading this poem. You take good care. Hope all is well at your end.
Joy always,
Susan
greetings dear zuzana - yes, that's very true that we all need to be reminded of our own abilities and strengths - rising again and being beautiful! what a wonderful way to see it - do enjoy your time away - i've been having more that a little touch of summer fever myself - wanting only to be outdoors in the brilliant heat of the sun - so hard to sit here beside my window "looking out" and not "being out" - i know you know what i mean - in any event, lovely to see you again - have a glorious time away - and i look forward to your return - namaste' - jenean
yes, dear susan, i agree - being reminded to rise and rise again - and then again - we all need to know that we CAN - wonderful to see you - and things here are somewhat less hectic now - however, i will be having my little g-children every day the remainder of the summer until school starts so that will mean my time online will be limited once more - but i love having them and we have such fun together - so i cherish those times - and what's up with you these days? what's new and exciting???
Dear Jenean:
Thanks for the lovely words. I sent you a couple of poems some time ago. Did you get them? I reckon your summer is playful and occupied with your grandchildren around. Have a wonderful time with them.
Come by the meanderings for some soulful conversation when there is time. Would love to have you there.
So long.
Joy always,
Susan
dearest susan! oh, yes, i got your magnificent poems! they are incredibly beautiful and were new to me - actually i downloaded them into my poetry folder because i loved them so much - you are such a dear friend to always think of me and with such gifts!!! thank you! yes, summer is just a blur - i'm up at dawn and then out and about till dark and then still up very late - and then it begins again! :) but it's wonderful to have it all to do! and i promise to come by as soon as i can wind my way past here - please forgive and know that you are in my thoughts!!! much love -
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