heart’s so full
of dark gray cloudsgot me in its pull
wanna scream out loud
but sound don’t come
to a heart heavy as mine
thoughts turned numb
stayin' alive just to pine
seems the skies above
feel the same bleak way
weepin’ my loss of love
drippin’ sadness night and day
rains come down
deep into my soul
so ‘fraid i’m gonna drown
and it stings me so
trickles down thru my flesh
strippin’ ‘way all that’s left
leavin’ nothin’ but an empty mess
like a sneaky sinister theft
winds of despair
leavin’ my mind tossed about
can’t rebuild can’t repair
this crimson vessel full of doubt
5 comments:
It seems a lot of sadness here... hoping your heart isn't really aching, and that you are just writing as an exercise. Sending you a big hug either way. xo
well, we can share this moment. But I do hope like Karena said that you are writing and not experiencing this sadness today.
Great writing
Powerful, emotional words. I guess though, at times, we have to experience the lows to appreciate the highs.
Take care.
brilliant,, in my experience, if i don't hurt-maybe not all the time but definitely not outside my experience, to say the least, i cannot produce my art...and so, i would say here, as i read these words of pain, i really felt them as well.. brava, dear lady. xoxo and an extra big hug just in case you need it. ;)
i see this is a repost so you are fine, no? okxoxoxox
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