he comes from a place far away
a place where night is day
and day brings no light
like a devil's dark blight
where love’s gone astray
and can't find its way
a place where barren is the land
like pearls of a broken strand
and cross the mountains deep
windswept tears sweep
the jagged terrain
like a ragin’ train
yes, he comes
from a place
far away
a place where night is day
and day brings no light
like a devil's dark blight
where love’s gone astray
and can't find its way
a place where barren is the land
like pearls of a broken strand
and cross the mountains deep
windswept tears sweep
the jagged terrain
like a ragin’ train
yes, he comes
from a place
far away
he comes
from
my
heart
he
comes
to
me
he
comes
for
me
from
my
heart
he
comes
to
me
he
comes
for
me
.
.
.
10 comments:
Wow. This one is powerful. I had to study the images for a moment. It looks like swirls of a woman's long, beautiful hair.
The WV o this one? hopee...hope
Strong visual words in this one!
Jenean, the way you have set up your words between those images is simply luscious!!! I can't say enough how much I enjoyed this piece... its juxtaposition of darkness and light... and the burn of tears amidst a harsh terrain. Simply beautiful!!!
Nevine
hi trish - you know, i always love hearing what others see/hear in what i do - you saw a woman's long hair here [that never occurred to me] and i see a heart - an open heart open in layers - i mean, i really cannot "see" anything else! sort of like the face in the vase kind of thing isn't it - another little full moon muse working on this one and i confess i do love it! and the image with it - thanks so much for your own kind words, as always!
greetings sir alex! how great to see you over this way - seems i'm so behind in my own visits for a while - so i especially am grateful for others coming by my humble abode here - in any event, thank you so much - you certainly do have a lot going on in your world of late - i do come by and play catch up on reading when i can and there are always so many wonderful and exciting things at your blog! have a wonderful friday!
dear nevine - thanks so much for your words - i love playing with images and words and seeing what other statement or reinforcement can be had by doing that - i'm SUCH a visual person which makes it just mandatory that i have images and they need to complete the words - and of the words, again, a case of those voices speaking through my fingertips here - a full moon weaving of words - so glad you liked, dear friend! hope all is well in your world!
I've just posted Callas singing Tosca and was reminded of you.
oh, pat, i am speechless! callas - tosca! i am humbled by your kind words and thoughts! thank you!
This is very powerful....!! Another visual visceral poem from your incredibly fertile heart and mind....!
greetings dear naomi - as always i am so humbled by your kind words and so happy if you've enjoyed these little words here - thank you! i've so missed by visits of late to your place - wonderful to see you up and at it once more, too! ;)
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