in that moment
of time stood still
when first we met
when your smile
embraced my heart
and your eyes
became my own
without words
without sound
without touch
i had been found
i was home
but in that moment
of time stood still
when i turned
and walked away
that cold dark day
when your
broken heart
bled disbelief
and your eyes
screamed in pain
without you
without us
i was lost
and
remain
of time stood still
when first we met
when your smile
embraced my heart
and your eyes
became my own
without words
without sound
without touch
i had been found
i was home
but in that moment
of time stood still
when i turned
and walked away
that cold dark day
when your
broken heart
bled disbelief
and your eyes
screamed in pain
without you
without us
i was lost
and
remain
lost still
wandering the
highways and byways
of what was...
the maze of
lost souls
wandering the
highways and byways
of what was...
the maze of
lost souls
.
.
.
17 comments:
What was...
that maze should not be so
so lost
if from ours souls...
Beautiful loving poetry my dear friend
So glad to visit you back again after the long journey...
Cheers
my dear gypsy!
;-)
D.
what can I say? this is perfection. xo
So wonderful to see you back. And in such FORM and beauty!
Nobody says it like you Jenean.
oh, dear dulce! how absolutely wonderful to have you come by - seems we've both been distracted a bit but really great to have you come by and leave such kind words! thank you and have a great day!
and you, dear glynis! making my day all the brighter with your visit for which i am so grateful! so glad to have you drop by!
oh, trish, i'm not so sure about the form and beauty things as i feel so far away from all of that at the moment but my heart cherishes your kind kind words! thank you!
from you pat, i am so humbled! thank you! and congratulations, yourself, lady! ;)
Gypsy, this brought me back to that maze. Yes, what a clever name for this poem. A maze it becomes when we turn around and leave something important behind.
That was beautiful.
Hope you are well, and enjoying summer.
so glad you enjoyed the maze, observer - and you're so right about when we turn around and leave someone important behind - thanks so much for coming by!
hello there lady! so wonderful to have you come by with kind words - just a bit under the weather these days - hope your summer is going full speed ahead! ;)
What an absolutely beautiful poem! Just stopping by to say hi and to let you know that I'm thinking of you and miss you. Hope you are well and enjoying summer. Cheers, cher!
Your poems always have so much depth of feeling---I wish I knew more, but, sometimes feel I know too much. That is a gift, my dear.
your words too kind, naomi, but i thank you for them nevertheless - there is nothing more to be known really - the words tell the story - so wonderful to have you come by!
Your words paint such beautiful imagery.
Thanks so much for sharing
oh, thank you for such kind words, dear friend - you are so very welcome!
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